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Sunderland-Polished Draft
5/23/2010

-Good strong draft. Some suggestions...

-Your names (last initial only) should be on homepage

-Change "Project Catalog" to "Website Index" in homepage

-Each page should have a meaningful title and topic sentence.

-Too texty. Remove long blocks of text. Only complete sentences should be thesis statement and page topic sentences. Everything else you write should be phrases and bullets.

-Make quotes stand apart from your writing more. Different font style, size or color.

-Need more visuals. Also visuals are small.

-Graphs need year in caption.

-Why a "1" on horizontal axes of graphs?

Overall, nice draft: 45/50

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